好开心啊！！SASHA官方网站上有我文章！
<P>近日，我参加了SASHA官方网站上的一项写作运动，虽然我没有赢得前三名，但是我的文章就在她的网站上发表了！</P><P>I liked the holiday because I could see my relatives. And I spend the happy time with them. My family is big. And the menbers lived in many places. Some are in other countries. </P>
<P>They could come to the hometown each five years at Christmas time. We could eat together and the food were cooked by ourselves. I always look forward to the time that my relatives come here. It's so exciting. And we told all things .I told them what had happened to me in this 5 years, and they told me their interesting things. Of course, we took the photo together. And I also took the presents to them ,the presents were all made by myself.. And they were so happy to receive my present and liked it so much!
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<P>I liked the presents from them, too. We could keep them carefully! At the holiday we went to a lot of places together. We did every thing together because we loved each other. And the time for us was so little, so we were treasured it!
<I>Li Ming from China</I></P>
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<P><EM>欢迎大家去她的网站看其他人的作品！</EM></P>
<P><a href="http://www.sashacohen.com/memory2.shtml" target="_blank" >http://www.sashacohen.com/memory2.shtml</A></P> <P>Haha, Li Ming? Imaging which "Ming" is used for your Chinese name.</P><P>By the way, wasn't the title of the articles for this writing competition related to Sasha Cohen?</P> <P>No! Ming is my middle name ,she make amistake. I wrote to her "Li Ming X".But she thought that my family is X ,and my given name is Li Ming .Kimmie even made this mistake ,too.</P>
<P>Here is the subject:</P>
<P>ENTER SASHA'S HOLIDAY CONTEST!
WIN PRIZES!
HAVE YOUR ENTRIES PUBLISHED ON CHRISTMAS DAY!</P> <P>好厉害啊！</P><P>恭喜小公主了！</P><P>唉！</P><P>什么时候我能在我喜欢的选手的网站上发表文章就好了！</P> <DIV class=quote><B>以下是引用<I>小公主</I>在2004-12-26 10:15:50的发言：</B>
<P>No! Ming is my middle name ,she make amistake. I wrote to her "Li Ming X".But she thought that my family is X ,and my given name is Li Ming .Kimmie even made this mistake ,too.</P></DIV>
<P>I think you have made a mistake in adventage. All of the Chinese characters used for the given name should be connected together. For example, in English, we use Zhao Hongbo or Hongbo Zhao, not Zhao Hong Bo or Hong Bo Zhao. Pay attention to it next time. By the way, as a middle school student, you are good at English.</P>
Oh !Yes! Thank you for telling me ! I will try my best nest time. <P>I have seen your short message just now.</P><P>Congratulations! A nice passage. </P><P>You are so lucky that some of your family members live in other countries.Did you get a chance to visit them in their countries?</P> No!Just they came to GuangZhou.
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