S/Z LP 沉思 解析

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hongligl 发表于 2006-12-7 13:05:00 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式

小雪宏博编节目的时候我有很多时候在场,我知道他们要表现的主题和两条主线及动作安排, 但COC 之前从没看他们完整地滑过。看了小雪宏博的沉思非常感动,像在读一个动人的故事。他们真正做到了让那些技术动作服务于表现主题。我个人非常喜欢这套节目,想把他们的节目内容发到国内外花滑网站。我建议他们把他们的编排思想和主题表现写出来,并把我所知道的他们的编排思路的框架落在了纸上,小雪宏博进行了修改细化。下面是小雪宏博对《沉思》的释解:

多少辛酸,多少艰难历程,当她和他双手相握时,那是一种爱,一种超越的爱!!!

平静光洁的冰面,品味着坎坷的经历,在一曲(沉思)音乐中,瞬间让人潸然泪下。人身经历一生永记。。。。。。

花样滑冰

第一部分:

宏博舞蹈动作

开始两人相背―――在晶莹的冰雪世界里。

小雪宏博向后慢慢的滑过,―――寻找。

在相互交逪的一瞬间―――宏博发现娇小美丽的小雪,

那一刻彼此试探着牵引着双手轻轻相握,两人拉手反向伸臂动作―――但是命运险些让这两人失之交臂

小雪抱宏博腰燕式仰望宏博,宏博张双臂―――小雪对宏博的崇敬依赖(小鸟依人),宏博对小雪温柔的呵护

双手相握宏博倒滑小雪前滑转两人短暂的后滑行――――宏博回望小雪,小雪注视宏博--- 命运让小雪宏博开始了双人滑事业

快速前滑进入3T-2T―――勇往直前,进军高难度

舞蹈动作,大一(英文叫展翅的雄鹰)连接进入2A―――振翅高飞

舞蹈动作复杂的连接进入捻转―――相互追逐着。向往着人生的历程。

出类拔萃的技术令人叹为观止;

舞蹈动作大一进入托举―――以一定的艺术和超强的技术为根基。―――第一次职业生涯的升华(新台阶)(1999 世锦赛2000

直接进入螺旋线(英语叫死亡螺旋线)换手换姿势―――情绪的低谷,内心痛苦的挣扎,现实的残酷。

紧接第二部分

舞蹈动作的步伐连接相互交错着连接到舞蹈托举,―――挑战自我,从低迷中崛起,像凤凰涅磐,痛苦中得到新生 ,向往着新的起点

直线接续步,有力,转身,上体的变化脚下的转体,―――想要挣脱出艺术的束缚。展现自我。

抒情的舞蹈,勾脚动作―――感情线:波澜起伏的命运豁然让两人平静下来深深的感到那除了花样滑冰之外的东西。爱!对方所给予的丝丝情感和浓浓的爱意。还有什么可以让两人分开即使人已经离去可是我会用身体的全部,让你归来!!!哪怕是足尖的力量我都要让你回到我得怀里。侧重感情的描述,波折起伏,缠绵悱恻;

双手相握深情对视滑入背靠背的两个抛跳 3Sth- 3Lth―――心心相印,超越梦想,从胜利走向更大的胜利!

两个抛跳中间的小舞蹈托举―――胜利后的欢庆,憧憬着新的胜利,宏博对小雪的欣赏和珍爱

燕式接续步―――进入花样滑冰和情感的自由王国,像比翼双飞的鸟儿,紧紧相依相随,心情就像风一样自由, 尽情展示艺术与技术的美,对未来充满无限的憧憬

转入双人联合旋转整个过程充分的展现肢体上的言语,―――两人相携相拥,不离不弃,协力奋争。

进入第三部分

滑出结束旋转,两人激情振臂相望,全速滑向第三个托举―――走出困境 充满自信再创辉煌!

结束及造型:单膝着冰滑行,小雪手臂目光朝向远方宏博将小雪拉向自己,两人深情相拥胜利后的歇息,呓语深长的体会着花样滑冰所带来得财富,对花样滑冰那浓浓的依恋和坎坷半生直至辉煌的快乐过程!!!用真情的浪漫去体会一种事业。会让时间随着音乐的缠绵渐渐远去!!!小雪似意犹未尽

lisa76 发表于 2006-12-7 13:28:00 | 显示全部楼层

太棒了,这个沙发最温馨的说~~

“小雪似意犹未尽, 而宏博离心已定向往着未来憧憬着新的生活,此刻小雪深有体会的紧紧相依!!!”

melodies 发表于 2006-12-7 13:28:00 | 显示全部楼层

http://shenxuehongbo.blog.sohu.com/24091363.html?act=1165469113879#comment

大家到s/z blog 这里留言啊!!!

我的留言:

写得好美好美!有点想哭得感觉啊!!!
非常谢谢你们把这套 沉思 一一的述说给我们大家听。 从一开始看你们这套lp,就深深地感受到你们想表达的一切。 那是一种刻骨铭心的历程,那是相互扶持的爱,在我们生活当中是不可以缺少的。
非常地感动。
希望你们在总决赛能有好的表现!加油·

dingdingy 发表于 2006-12-7 15:05:00 | 显示全部楼层

抒情的舞蹈,勾脚动作―――感情线:波澜起伏的命运豁然让两人平静下来深深的感到那除了花样滑冰之外的东西。爱!对方所给予的丝丝情感和浓浓的爱意。还有什么可以让两人分开即使人已经离去可是我会用身体的全部,让你归来!!!哪怕是足尖的力量我都要让你回到我得怀里。侧重感情的描述,波折起伏,缠绵悱恻;

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这个写得好啊,hoho

lisa76 发表于 2006-12-7 16:18:00 | 显示全部楼层

“生命的歌唱,灵魂的舞蹈,命运的馈赠”

结合楼主的美文,个人以为雪博沉思舞美设计的最显著特色(亮点)在于对冰舞技巧(元素)之成功借鉴(移植):
突破此前单一的直线步法,富有创意地大量采用双人同步旋转(身),交换(叉)舞(花)步设计一方面与沉思选曲本身高超的和声(弦),对位音乐技法融合一体,交相辉映;另一方面扬长避短,充分体现了选手的技术优势:身材适中,配合默契,肩部力量略不足托举稍逊,而腰部及下肢力量好,动作灵活富于变化,控冰能力强.
同时,编排中丰富的平托扶举(区别于技术托举,即上文称之为舞蹈托举)POSE不仅彰显层次造型之美,提高了整体节目的艺术观赏性,又十分巧妙地烘托出主人公风雨共沐,心心相印,不离不弃之主题.
(ADD:COC沉思舞美线路简图
交叉转身--连跳--单跳--捻转--技术托举1--螺旋线--舞蹈托举1--单人旋转--(滑行步)托举2--联合踢腿(?)--女伴下蹲步--踩(勾)脚--抛跳1--舞蹈托举2--抛跳2--舞蹈托举3--燕式步+提刀滑行--(女伴)后脚搭(男伴)前肩--联合旋转(身)--托举3--跪立ENDING )


在地愿结连理枝

在天愿为比翼鸟

大写的‘人’字(天涯相伴续传奇)

(注:图片来源新浪博客)



芋子包 发表于 2006-12-7 20:07:00 | 显示全部楼层

楼上的更棒

我也留言了

呵呵

peipei_fay 发表于 2006-12-7 21:02:00 | 显示全部楼层

爱死那个勾脚的动作了,缠绵悱恻阿

melodies 发表于 2006-12-8 02:49:00 | 显示全部楼层

结束及造型:单膝着冰滑行,小雪手臂目光朝向远方宏博将小雪拉向自己,两人深情相拥胜利后的歇息,呓语深长的体会着花样滑冰所带来得财富,对花样滑冰那浓浓的依恋和坎坷半生直至辉煌的快乐过程!!!用真情的浪漫去体会一种事业。会让时间随着音乐的缠绵渐渐远去!!!小雪似意犹未尽, 而宏博离心已定向往着未来憧憬着新的生活,此刻小雪深有体会的紧紧相依!!!

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未来的向往!加油啊。

http://shenxuehongbo.blog.sohu.com/24091363.html

大家如果对lp有什么提议,去发表一下吧。

风语者 发表于 2006-12-8 08:01:00 | 显示全部楼层

是命运险些让这两人失之交臂

命运让小雪宏博开始了双人滑事业

勇往直前,进军高难度

相互追逐着。向往着人生的历程。

情绪的低谷,内心痛苦的挣扎,现实的残酷。

心心相印,超越梦想,从胜利走向更大的胜利!

进入花样滑冰和情感的自由王国

两人相携相拥,不离不弃,协力奋争

胜利后的欢庆,憧憬着新的胜利

走出困境 充满自信再创辉煌!

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好激烈的思想斗争啊,这是滑的“沉思”还是“长征组曲”啊?

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warrior 发表于 2006-12-8 08:47:00 | 显示全部楼层

hongligl:

强烈建议你翻译成英文,发表在国外花滑网站 such as FSU 上。

lisa76 发表于 2006-12-8 09:15:00 | 显示全部楼层

小声地建议,可否考虑郑重挑选一个特别的日子例如2月14日情人节那天将英译文放到FSU上,给全世界冰迷一个惊喜考虑到这套节目舞美编排尚可能改动变化,现在POST时机似乎还不太成熟,而且有LACK神秘感之虞:)......

引用HONGLIGL此前在FSU上的发言:

I do know exactly how they chose Meditation. Lori provided S/Z with several pieces of music to choose from. S/Z chose Meditation for their short program. He didn't even know the name of the music (his English is not very good and he didn't know what meditation means in Chinese) and he didn't really related it to B/S. When asked what he feels when listening to the music Hongbo picure himself by lakeside gazing at the water and thinking about their past. They felt they are deeply related to the music and they wanted to use it to tell their own story, how he discover Xue and what they feel for each other and what they went through etc. Lori was deeply touched by his story and she suggested that they use it as LP as it would be too short to tell their story in the SP ). I offered to show them B/S's video but they declined it. They said they don't want to be influenced or restrained by B/S's program. They want to do it their way.


sunshine 发表于 2006-12-8 10:06:00 | 显示全部楼层
以下是引用lisa76在2006-12-8 9:15:19的发言:

小声地建议,可否考虑郑重挑选一个特别的日子例如2月14日情人节那天将英译文放到FSU上,给全世界冰迷一个惊喜考虑到这套节目舞美编排尚可能改动变化,现在POST时机似乎还不太成熟,而且有LACK神秘感之虞:)......

引用HONGLIGL此前在FSU上的发言:

I do know exactly how they chose Meditation. Lori provided S/Z with several pieces of music to choose from. S/Z chose Meditation for their short program. He didn't even know the name of the music (his English is not very good and he didn't know what meditation means in Chinese) and he didn't really related it to B/S. When asked what he feels when listening to the music Hongbo picure himself by lakeside gazing at the water and thinking about their past. They felt they are deeply related to the music and they wanted to use it to tell their own story, how he discover Xue and what they feel for each other and what they went through etc. Lori was deeply touched by his story and she suggested that they use it as LP as it would be too short to tell their story in the SP ). I offered to show them B/S's video but they declined it. They said they don't want to be influenced or restrained by B/S's program. They want to do it their way.

的确,个人觉得B/S的Meditation好比是一幅西方的写实的油画作品,生动的诠释了音乐所表达的故事。而S/Z的节目更像一幅中国水墨画,让人观后意犹未尽,深深地陷入沉思之中。

melodies 发表于 2006-12-26 13:49:00 | 显示全部楼层

这一篇 不是很好翻译啊。

我的中文相对来说不是很好,很难翻译成一篇好的英文。。。

前面那段要把原文的精髓翻译出来不简单,不简单。。 。

看来要请一些高人。。。 对花滑比较熟悉的冰迷。本人有待提高。

melodies 发表于 2006-12-8 12:46:00 | 显示全部楼层

大家多多支持S/Z的BLOG.

AI YA YA ... 他们可能想着关闭。。 AI YA YA .

飞月流愁 发表于 2006-12-8 13:06:00 | 显示全部楼层
以下是引用lisa76在2006-12-8 9:15:19的发言:

小声地建议,可否考虑郑重挑选一个特别的日子例如2月14日情人节那天将英译文放到FSU上,给全世界冰迷一个惊喜考虑到这套节目舞美编排尚可能改动变化,现在POST时机似乎还不太成熟,而且有LACK神秘感之虞:)......

引用HONGLIGL此前在FSU上的发言:

I do know exactly how they chose Meditation. Lori provided S/Z with several pieces of music to choose from. S/Z chose Meditation for their short program. He didn't even know the name of the music (his English is not very good and he didn't know what meditation means in Chinese) and he didn't really related it to B/S. When asked what he feels when listening to the music Hongbo picure himself by lakeside gazing at the water and thinking about their past. They felt they are deeply related to the music and they wanted to use it to tell their own story, how he discover Xue and what they feel for each other and what they went through etc. Lori was deeply touched by his story and she suggested that they use it as LP as it would be too short to tell their story in the SP ). I offered to show them B/S's video but they declined it. They said they don't want to be influenced or restrained by B/S's program. They want to do it their way.



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